Awesome! A few other thoughts, referring to the numbering convention as in the above video:
-sc04: I still think this can be taken out, time given to sc 05 -sc05: Composition could show the hot dog more, center him more. drumbeat could probably start as soon as hot dog enters scene? -sc06: I can try and animate a reaction, from boredom to expression of wonderment, or awestruck. -sc08: he starts panting as I have ruffed out. -sc10: I still think this can be taken out, especially with the timing that you have right now, we can focus on the closeup for longer. -sc16: I still think it could be a cut to the lights instead of a crossfade. -sc21: could be longer for the heart eyes as discussed.
scenes 6 and 8 revisions will show different reactions at least.
Awestruck to excitement. If any of you have other suggestions, please let us know :) DISCUSS!
Awesome! A few other thoughts, referring to the numbering convention as in the above video:
ReplyDelete-sc04: I still think this can be taken out, time given to sc 05
-sc05: Composition could show the hot dog more, center him more. drumbeat could probably start as soon as hot dog enters scene?
-sc06: I can try and animate a reaction, from boredom to expression of wonderment, or awestruck.
-sc08: he starts panting as I have ruffed out.
-sc10: I still think this can be taken out, especially with the timing that you have right now, we can focus on the closeup for longer.
-sc16: I still think it could be a cut to the lights instead of a crossfade.
-sc21: could be longer for the heart eyes as discussed.
scenes 6 and 8 revisions will show different reactions at least.
Awestruck to excitement. If any of you have other suggestions, please let us know :) DISCUSS!