Hot Dog Eat Dog

Okay so theres a lot of changes in this one, in terms of pacing. I decided it was feeling a bit rushed during the gazing scene. Also i thought to cut one of the gaze shots out.  So in order, we have : 1. Reaction shot(scene 6), 2. First shot of Hot dog guy(scene 7). 3. Detailed shot of Dog(scene 8), 4. detailed shot of hotdog guy(scene 9), and that will transition into the dream

Since I sped up the tempo, it naturally changes the pace of it, so this is still a lot faster than what we originally had it at. One thing to note as well, is that in the beginning we now introduce the dog as the car drives into frame.  Thoughts?